Our class listened to our first draft of the advert and gave us some invaluable feedback on how to improve it. Before they listened to it we asked them some questions, just to get specific responses on some things that we were not sure about. For example we asked whether they liked my voice as the voiceover and also if they had any idea what type of music we could use for it.
The feedback was as follows:
- Clear voice over
- Turn up the volume on interview clips
- Good idea to disperse the voice over - retains awareness
- The clip about homosexuality being a 'taboo subject' is a good clip because it explains what the documentary is all about.
- Good fade out of clips
- Nice ending
- Good information
- Needs a punchier beginning that is more catchy
- Maybe have a male voice over because all the clips are female - perhaps somebody older as well?
- Use church bells
- Don't need Elliott's voice at the beginning
- Music could be something classical and calm, e.g. piano, orchestral
- Quality of audio at the beginning is sketchy
- Volume needs equalising
- Sharon's clip is too long
- My voice over should be a bit slower
- Voice over should maybe come in sooner at the beginning
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